Me and Bri's Roleplay?

Ai then let go of my chin and stood up. He was furious now. He charged a laser beam and aimed it right for me.” How dare you defy me like that!!!!!!?” Just as he released the laser beam, Katsuya teleported in front of me and made a shield!!! I couldn’t believe it! Katsuya came to save me!

“Katsuya!!!! You came…..for…..me!” I said with tears in my eyes. “And…you saved me!!!!! Thank you!!” now I was sobbing uncontrollably.

Me and Bri's Roleplay?performing arts

Dude, it's way too long, and how the heck you can fit all those words without Adding Details???

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Ah well, I like story based on anime/manga, so I'll read it and come back after I'm done.^^

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Dang, it's such a great story...^^

I laugh couple of times, mostly when the girl (forgot her name) was embarrassed. I also kinda covered my face with my hand and say "Oh gee...." XD

God, it's such a great story, and it's quite descriptive, as if you are her, and it's not too descriptive to bored people. It's nice and sweet and peaceful, yet it's quite mysterious. Yes, when I finish reading everything, it kept me wondering what will happen next, and as well as other questions I wanted to ask.

Keep your great work up! A mix of fantasy, action, and adventure are like the best! >:D

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