Me and Bri's Roleplay?
Great great job! ^_^
If I have to rate it, it'll be 9.9 over 10. Well, the reason that you lost 0.1 point is grammar and spelling errors, but it doesn't interfere much during the reading. ^_~
Finish your story too! =D
Also, get some pictures of them. And I don't mind if it's really long. =)
Me and Bri's Roleplay?binoculars opera theater
It's good but a bit long, then again it probably wouldn't be that interesting if it was a short story. Oh and when Ai kidnapped her it should be lure not lore. Lore is mythology, legend, etc. while lure is what you meant.|||It's very interesting so far.
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