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The first place I would like to go is Rio de Janeiro. “Brazilians say that God created the world in six days and on the seventh day he created Rio. Rio - “The Marvelous City” – embraces one Atlantic Ocean with its famous beaches like Copacabana, Ipanema, and Leblon, a paradise on Earth! That remains to be seen…it is the location, the tropical climate, The Samba and Schools and of course the world famous Carnival Ceremonies that have given Rio de Janeiro its image of a heavenly place on earth. In contrary, to what the names suggests, the city was not foundation next to a river, but is (Located at a bay).
Rio de Janeiro is one the most spectacular cities on the planet. In Rio they have a fantastic sight called “Christ The Redeemer” on Corcovado Mountain, which gives an even higher perspective, and is the most well-known and recognized landmark of Rio. Another sight seeing is for any true football (soccer) fan, a visit to the Maracana stadium is a required pilgrimage, where you can lay your feet in the imprints of those belonging to the great pele and many other legends. Also the nightlife in Rio is like the city that throws the world’s largest party doesn’t go into hibernation after Ash Wednesday. Rio has a vibrant music and arts scene: classical music and opera, art-house cinema, laid back jazz and chorinho spots, open-air bars, over-the top Samba clubs, and throbbing night clubs. The current social climate in Rio has given the Cariocas-The Residents of the City- a unique way of living.
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